Gabrielle Buffaloe
Ms. Asuncion                                                                                                                                     
English 9H, Block 3
8 January 2016                                                                                                                       
Business Letter to Disney World
20835 Vickory Park Dr,
Ashburn, VA 20148

Walt Disney World Resort,
Orlando, FL 32830

Dear Mr. Robert A. Iger,
I recently visited Disney World. While my family and I were staying there we used the MagicBands as our room keys, park tickets, FastPasses, and meal plan. They were very useful   because everything was contained on one band that you can never loose. It is easy to keep track of because it is on our wrist. I also have some suggestions for the bands and I think that this concept could also work when applied to a school.

The bands made much of the vacation simple by condensing room keys, park tickets, FastPasses and even money for meals and snacks into one place. It is also amazing because you can save the pictures that are taken on rollercosters onto the bands. This new system makes everything simple and efficient so that all of your time can be spent having fun.

I think that it would be nice if, much like the meal plan where you get a certain amount of snacks a day which are identified by a certain symbol, each family could get a certain number of small gifts in their trip. These gifts could also be identified by a special symbol and could be small pieces of merchandise from any of the gift shops in Disney World.

On our trip, the FastPasses were set up so that in a specific time frame each member of my family would get a FastPass to a certain ride. Instead, give the family as a whole all of the FastPasses, so that if one person did not like rollercosters then they could sit out and someone would get to go on the ride twice. This could be used instead of the current system where if someone wishes to not go on a ride their FastPass will then be wasted.

I also think that the MagicBands could be used in schools. If students scanned their bands before entering class it would eliminate teachers having to take attendance. This would aloe for more teaching time. Students could save their lunch money onto the bands and could even check out library books using them. If the bands were able to connect to the internet, than the students could save projects and other homework assignments onto their bands to be used instead of flash drives. Students could even log onto school computers by scanning their bands. The use of Magic Bands in schools could be a form of free advertising.

Overall, I think that the Magic Bands are a wonderful idea. There are so many things that they can be used for and everything is so much simpler when they are used.

Sincerely,

Gabrielle Buffaloe


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